[Ended] Daily Knowledge Dive #47: Rate and Earn 200 Coins!
  

Sangfor Jojo Lv5Posted Jul-08-2025 10:03

Hey everyone!
  
We're excited to announce a new interactive activity called "Daily Knowledge Dive". This is a fantastic opportunity to engage with our community while enhancing your knowledge.


1. How It Works:

Step 1. Daily Document Reading
Each day, we will share a specific document for you to read.

Link:  Sangfor Athena XDR and FortiGate Integration Guide


Step 2. Vote for Quality and Give Feedback
After reading, we invite you to vote on the document's quality and share feedback. You can provide the following possible feedback:
     A. Incomplete and missing information, like configuration steps and illustrations
     B. The screenshots do not match the description.
     C. Over 3 disordered hierarchical headings.
     D. Over 2 massive grammar and spelling issues in a sentence.

!!! Please provide your feedback based on the following standardized reply format:
From Chapter:  chapter name (For example: 2.3 Athena XDR Side)
Issue Description:  xxxxxx


Step 3. Get rewards for your participation
1) Each user who votes will receive 20 Coins!
2) If you find quality issues in the document, please provide a screenshot or a detailed description of the problem. For each adopted feedback, you will earn 200 Coins! If your feedback is the same or similar to others, we will adopt the first and complete one.

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2. Not Adopted Feedback Including:
1) The "Download" button is ineffective because the function is used for a markdown editor and can't be improved at present.

2) The screenshots for explaining the configuration steps are displayed on the next page if the current page space is insufficient.

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Kbob Lv2Posted Jul-09-2025 09:49
  
Issue on page 7

Article misuse or omission: "Security log" should likely be “The security log” or “Security logs” to match proper grammar.

Awkward structure: "can search the Fortigate logs" is unclear and awkward. Logs do not "search" other logs; the user or system searches the logs.

Brand capitalization: "Fortigate" should be "FortiGate", as per the official spelling.

Improved version:
“You can search the FortiGate logs in the security log section.”
or
“The security logs can be used to search FortiGate events.”

Rendy Rinaldy Lv2Posted Jul-09-2025 09:50
  
Sentence from page 7
“Security alert can detect the alert from the Fortigate.”

Issues:

Missing article: Should be “The security alert” or “Security alerts”.

Redundant phrasing: "alert can detect the alert" is repetitive and unclear.

Brand capitalization: Again, "Fortigate" should be "FortiGate".

Should be:
“Security alerts can detect events from the FortiGate device.”